ashleylee

omsvmars22 : Wow....simply wow. I still can't believe that you and endless_secrets read my whole SEVEN chapters in one day...You guys are AWESOME! Thank you so much! :D And I ...

I’m sorry but this was SO hard to read with all your slang in there. I had to sometimes read the sentences over a few times until I understood what ...

This was good…but I’m not sure yet how this is a romance novel. I’m guessing we will find out later…?? :D Well, on to the review! She slowly reached for ...

All I did was copy/paste your story. All the corrections are in bold. The night was pitch black, the only light around were the beams that emitted from his head ...

endless_secrets Thanks so much! :D Your comment made me so happy! I really enjoy it when people say they like my word (as i'm sure every writer does :wink: ) ...

Gosh, Elliot has finally blurted the news to SOMEONE! I was wondering how long it would take for that guy to spill the beans. And Daniel, will he ever wake ...

Oh...I see! Thanks for explaining that! :wink: Again, wonderful work! ~ashley

How sweet! :D I absolutely love this story! You are a talented writer! It was as if the night time had simply erased any terrible event from the previous day; ...

Umm….wow. Wow wow wow…I really have no other word to explain your piece. Your descriptions and comparisons were beyond anything I have ever read. You used words to describe things ...

Umm, more detail may be needed because you need to paint a picture. Just adding a few sentences more would make it easier to understand! But that's just me... Don't ...

Okay Melkor, I have FINALLY finished corrected your stories. Whew! *wipes brow* And let me tell you before hand that your style of writing is so sarcastically funny and immensely ...

Wow. Such a powerful ending. :D I only noticed a few things so I’ll do those first. In his position, he could observe the goings on in Market Square without ...

JabberHut I don't think you are loosing your touch! Your review was as great as before! (ha "as" ha I promise to work on that!) Thanks so much! :D Dommy65 ...

Gosh, I am always a step behind everyone in correcting your stories...Grr...Jeeze... But anyway this is the "chapter eight" review. :D lol Wow…very sad. So Melody is going to die? ...

KJ : You are such a pal! :D What would I do without you! lol And I will talk to my mom about staying at your aunt and uncles for ...