ashleylee

I feel so bad :? It must have took me almost two months to get this posted. So, I apologize to all of you that PM me to ask why ...

Interesting, Night Mistress! They are sending a mate for her to take…hmm, all the possibilities that this story could hold! lol :wink: But anyway, back to your story… “That doesn’t ...

The first thing I noticed again was the pace. This moved so fast it was hard for me to comprehend what was happening. First, I think you need to describe ...

Good. Your plot is really moving along! :D I did notice a few things: Before she padded into the bathroom, Nicole shut off the alarm and stretched. In the bathroom, ...

Wow…that is so sad… But you did well. You kept me reading till the very end, and now I can’t wait for the third installment. I must say that the ...

Very good start! :D I can understand why you like these characters so much. They are so life-like, so real that you feel as though they are there. Also, you ...

Sorry this took so long for me to get this on here. :? But anyway, hopefully you all enjoy it! **Edited as of Sept. 21** ______________________________________ CHAPTER NINE The next ...

deavarna_satina : Your praise is very uplifting! :D :D :D Thank you so much! That was such a sweet review! *beams with happiness* I'm glad you like this so much. ...

Alarainya : I promise to be posting soon! :wink: Thanks for reading!

Avens : Wow, thanks for putting so much effort into this! It really helped a lot! :D Thanks!

Boon : Thanks! I will change the suggested above :wink: Yeah, my story is kind of creepy, but that's because it's a crime/police/murder piece...I guess those are creepy. But somehow, ...

Elitehusky : That was probably the nicest review I have ever gotten! :D Thanks a tone!! I know, not a lot of people seem to like the crime/police stuff but ...

Here's chapter two! I know it's kind of long but it was the shortest I could make it :? **Rated PG-13 for mild language** ______________________________________ CHAPTER TWO Monday, April 13, ...

Good! :D But very frustrating, at least for me. I absolutely loathed how Julia talked to people. I wanted to scream at her myself. She was being so rude, especially ...

To everyone : I just did a repost of this chapter and worked on more of the "showing" rather than the "telling" aspect. Hopefully that shows... Also, if you can't ...