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Kill him?? Kill Cristy’s father?? Whoa, this is getting crazy. But I think you have found a fan in me! :D Christian was gasping, taking in as much air as ...

Can you say “C-R-E-E-P-Y!!” That was so scary, especially when that Krobeth guy knew Christian’s name. Gives me the chills just thinking about it. Ug… Christian was very disappointed in ...

Hmm, that chapter was fairly short and I’m not sure I like the length. I seemed to enjoy the longer one better. But I guess that is how it goes…:wink: ...

Okay, I like the overall idea of this story so far, but I think you use WAY too much telling. I mean, it wasn’t just like that in one paragraph. ...

*edited majorly* hope this version is better :D

*edited majorly* hope this version is better :D

*edited majorly* hope this version is better :D

*edited majorly* hope this version is better :D

Very cute ending, Kels! Loved it! :D I did notice a few things: But he didn’t offer, and I didn’t dare to ask. The last bit of this sentence is ...

Oh my, that was simply adorable. I can just imagine a young boy sitting out in his front yard that is covered in dirt, not grass, sitting on his side, ...

Wow. Your voice is simply....amazing. I really don’t have words for it. *speechless* :D I did notice one thing, however small it is. It diffused in thick whisps as he ...

My goodness, what a powerful ending! I loved it. Absolutely fell in love with it! Beautifully done! :D A confetti snowstorm swirled down to fall upon Briar, the soft, pink ...

Hey, Merry! This story was good. But I’m kind of in the nit-picky mood so be warned :? This is gonna be long… All of these quotes at the same: ...

alwayswriter : I totally suggest rereading it. It is THAT good! :wink: I think that book almost had me in tears at a couple of spots so that's huge for ...

All right, I am apologizing ahead of time for the length of this (five pages, I know :? ) But I couldn't help it. I truly loved writing these five ...