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estead : You are too sweet! :D And I promise, cross my heart, that I will try to make it unique (emphasis on try :wink: ) But I will work ...

KJ : HEY BUDDY! Yeah, I agree with all the stuff you pointed out. I mean, I think Michelangelo's Night and Day might be a down-hill project from here. I ...

deavarna_satina : Oh, thanks, Hailey! I worked hard on this. I mean, it still has a long way to go but I think I have a start at something that ...

Amazing, BigBadBear, absolutely amazing. Those ending words...chills, I had, chills. It was really quite sad that you said Mary was buried and forgotten about. :( And how Christian and Cristy-Ann ...

Wow, that is so sad. I can’t believe that Mary died. I really liked her character…Grr…that makes me mad. But I guess, you had to touch the reader somehow and ...

Omgod…this is nuts. Absolutely nuts. And I’m pretty sure this shouldn’t be in Romantic Fiction. Too much Drama, no love. Not in the right forum, that’s for sure :wink: “So, ...

Intense! :D Very good ending! Loved it! This was Christian’s second time being suspended, the first time was when he got in a fight with a kid who thought that ...

Wow, that was CRAZY! This story is getting so good. I wish I could tell you more about it, like suggestions to make but there really isn’t any except for ...

What a jerk! Leaving poor Mary there alone. I really don’t like Christian. I mean, that started awhile back but I really REALLY don’t like him now. But anyway… Your ...

What a dork, seriously, that Christian. You did really well with the scene. So real. I thought this was the best chapter so far. I found no mistakes, nata, nothing, ...

Omgod, what!?!?!?! Krobeth is Mary’s father and he has been lying all this time! Wow, you sure know how to pull the rug out from underneath someone, don’t you! :wink: ...

Some crazy stuff, BigBadBear! I’m serious, this is nuts! But somehow, very addicting…:D “Yes, you see, the penalty for murder is death! I am a retired policeman, but I still ...

Okay, Merry, I’m back! :D Sorry it took me so long to re-review it... Even the tree branches had large, clear snow crystals that hung from it. First off, before ...

This is my most recent short story. It popped into my head last night and I just couldn't resist posting it. But beware, very rough and needs help so harsh ...

Okay, sorry this took so long to be put up. Now, this is the chapter where things get intense, so beware that it might be a little crazy at times. ...