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What a wonderful ending! It was simply perfect. Just loved it! :D Now, there are some things you need to watch out for: 1. DIALOGUE PUNCUATION. You did it on ...

Wow, that was crazy. I had never really looked at vampires that way, as dead. I mean, yeah, technically they are. But after reading this, I kind of looked at ...

Hey, Lucyy! I wanted to repay you the favor of reviewing, since you read my whole series, which I greatly appreciate by the way :wink: But, back to your story… ...

Wow, Scasha, that was simply…mind blowing. Really. And I loved every minute of it! :D I couldn’t stop until I reached the end, it was that good. I mean, at ...

All the possibilities... There is so much that could happen with this and you have my mind on overload, which is such a good thing! :D But I must comment ...

Oooo, Captain James Bentley is one of the suitors, isn't he? I just know it! :D Gosh, I really am liking this story! “Thank You.” Miss Sophia said to the ...

I love the rewrite, Merry! You included so much more stuff and the pace was perfect! Bravo to you! :D “It also says that you will move in with your ...

Okay, I just got done correcting your full Chapter One, and when I signed in to YWS and saw that you had it broken up, I was like “No!” hehe ...

Ooooohhhh, Merry! Right after that last line about the three suitors, I got goosebumps and I just knew this would be good story :D Throughout the evening, the Selwood household ...

Merry_Haven : Oh, thanks, Merry. That was sweet of you. Yeah...I kinda, umm, watched The Notebook and then wrote this so...umm, yeah :oops: I'll fix that to make it more ...

Sela Locke : Of course I will keep your thoughts in mind! I always take everyone's reviews into account. That's the only way we grow. But anyway... The Twilight Thing. ...

For those of you who don't catch on right away, I am switching between the past and the present. This chapter is jumping back to when Lana was a teenager. ...

omsvmars22 : Sometimes I wonder that same thing when I start new stories :lol: But I just can't resist! When an idea pops into my head, I just have to ...

In_the_Moonlight , thanks a bunch for reading! Yeah, I did miss a word there :oops: lucyy , of course I will PM you...but I must warn you, I'm not very ...

lucyy : Yes, I will keep posting chapters! I just have to review other people's work first :wink: Carmen is totally AGAINST Sophia/Isaac thing, just to let you know. Yeah, ...