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I think you caught me off guard a bit, Lillian. (I really do hope that name is okay :? ) At first, I thought I that maybe I was reading ...

All right, Lillian. (is that okay if I call you that?). This was another really good chapter. I felt you kind of skipped over some major parts however. How does ...

Tabithalillian, I am so so sorry that it took me so long to get to this. But you know, with school starting and homework and all that jazz, it’s hard ...

How can her mother expect her to get better when she is approaching the issue like that? Jeesh…but as you can see, I am really growing quite attached to this ...

That is so sad…how can people be so cruel? :evil: You are hitting every emotion dead on. I felt every one of them as if I was watching it happen. ...

Very passionate. This story is touching me. I’m not sure how to explain it but I feel for Sarah like I would for someone real. You are painting her so ...

Wow, your descriptions are unreal. You have such a imagery force going on here. I can picture everything you write, everything you say. It is like I am actually there, ...

So realistic, Merry. This girl’s emotions are so real, so impacting, that I can’t stop reading until the end. And I can’t help but feel bad for her, for her ...

Sam : Thanks bunches! :D Seriously, your reviews are so helpfully. I haven't written the next part yet but I should be starting on it this weekend so I'll PM ...

praisejoe : Thanks so much! :D Of course I will PM you! I am actually getting really good at remembering to do that :wink: Well I'm glad you like it ...

KJ : Thanks! :D I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, I wrote this really fast so I could post it on here. I'll go back and reread it and fix ...

KJ : That is a good point to consider...I'm not sure why I did that :oops: I will look into that... Thanks, kels, for reading, and I will get on ...

KJ : Thanks kels! :D I will work on that drone-ish thing you mentioned. Now that I am getting further and further in-depth with this, I will have to start ...

Night Mistress : Thanks for reading! yeah, now it is getting harder and harder to write this story so I'm gonna need as much help as I can. Whenever something ...

Night Mistress : I don't know yet how it will end...I guess I will just have to keep brainstorming about that one :wink: I should be posting part 5 soon. ...