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All right, I kind of struggled with this chapter :? So please, all help is needed! Happy Reading! ____________________ CHAPTER TWELVE Both Nate and Randy badgered me the whole way ...

Angel, lucy, Sunny, and Sela : I must thank you all for the support and the help. Sela, you were so honest, it was lovely! :D Sunny, you are always ...

Sunny, Lucy, Angel, KJ : Wow, you guys are A-MA-ZZZINNNGG! I love your upbeat comments and I Love how you guys give me criticism. I really hope that I can ...

Sunny, Lucy, and Angel : You guys are so great. Every chapter I post, you are all three here for me, ready to review. I always thank you guys and ...

Ethan's eyes were deep enough for any person, probably a lady, to fall in and get lost within. This is an awkwardly worded sentence. Maybe try: Ethan's eyes were deep ...

Back, Bri, for another review :wink: “He is arriving today,” Odette said. The secretary looked uneasy at me. "uneasily" instead of "uneasy" “So, do you know who are sparring against ...

Bri it is wonderful to hear that you are back. I've missed reading your stories so I tried to rush over here as quickly as I could once I got ...

Another chapter and another twist. Hope you enjoy it =] Happy Reading! ________________________ CHAPTER ELEVEN The boy seemed just as startled as I was, his eyes probing mine, brow scrunched ...

All right, this is my other favorite chapter to write! And Isaac is in this chapter so hopefully you guys enjoy it :D Happy Reading! _____________________ CHAPTER TEN Nate was ...

Ooo, I loved writing this chapter and the one after this so hopefully it shows. Happy Reading :D ____________________ CHAPTER NINE After Cassandra finished checking the rest of my body, ...

Hola, mimimac! I noticed this and I love when people post random bits from their stories (don't ask me why, cause I don't know myself) and I knew I couldn't ...

This was really too short to give a proper review and I apologize for saying this but immediately after I read this, I thought of Twilight . This is a ...

This was lovely and very original. I have never read anything like it. I do praise you on your use of vocabulary. However, towards the end there, your beautiful plot ...

Angel, Angel... *shakes head with frustration* Will I ever be as stunning a writer as you? I can't tell you how often I repeat the obvious: your imagery is magnificent, ...

mhmmcolleenx0 : I just finished reviewing your story and must I say, you had a really nice, solid beginning. I wish you the best of luck finishing it and if ...