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Hello, Bri. I'm back! :D I just copy/pasted again cause I'm being lazy (sorry :?) Chapter Four While I waited for Odette to come home, I busied myself by alternating ...

'Ello! (excuse my attempt at being british...:?...I just love british accents....okay, getting off topic *hem*) I'm here to look at your story and I'll just to the quote-by-quote average review ...

Hello, Ali-Cat! This is your first story, huH? Well, away I go to correct it!! :wink: I’m just starting Year 10 and, already, before I’ve even walked into the classroom, ...

Hiya!! I don't think I have seen you around here before. I guess I'll start by saying Welcome to YWS!! I hope you enjoy this site as much as I ...

Lucyy : Ah, thanks! :D that means so much to me! I totally get what you mean about Isaac/Sophia/reaction thing. I have been experimenting with that one and the rewrite ...

Hey, Kels! I'm baaaccckkk! :D hehe Wow, your story was very intense. Even when my basketball coach came in to talk to me, I was disorientated and couldn't think straight ...

lotti : Wow, thanks, that was so nice of you. Yeah, I know, it still needs a lot of work! :wink: and I need all the help I can get, ...

Hey Kels! Sorry, I won't be able to comment on this fully yet, but I will be doing that tonight. Promise. No lie! :D I have read half of it ...

So romantic, Lillian. :D I loved how you portrayed the vampire not like a monster, but of a victim. Very unique! “You couldn’t.” came a quiet reply in a voice ...

Okay, Lillian, you have a good start here. I think you might want to go into more detail at the beginning about why she moved and more of her thoughts ...

So very sad. I was definitely not expecting that. What a twist, Lucy?! :wink: “To America … and she will never come back, I just know it. Oh Kenso, it’s ...

jasmine12 : That was so sweet of you! Gosh, I can't believe you dug this up...it's so old! But thanks for the review just the same! CastlesInTheSky : Wow, you ...

dommy65 : Your reviews are always so nice! Thanks tons and TONS for keeping up this this. You have no idea how much that means to me! :D :D :D ...

Ooo, Ella is returning. I wonder what she has for Calla to do? I guess I will just have to wait for the next chapter to find out. I thought ...