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Night Mistress : Thanks! :D I'm glad this is slowly improving. It is what I wanted to happen. Thanks again!

dommy65 : Yeah, no problem. :D I'm glad you are liking the way the story is going so far! Thanks so much for reading! omsvmars22 : Thanks, Mars! It's okay. ...

Night Mistress : I can't thank you enough for taking the time to re-review these! I'm glad my writing is slowly improving the more I edit. And I can't wait ...

Bisquit : Yeah, you helped a lot! :D Thanks so much for looking at this! I have never had much talent in the poetry department but I'm glad you enjoyed ...

lucyy : Thanks so much! :D I'm glad you liked it! I was really nervous about posting this chapter because it is such a I'm glad I didn't disappoint. Thanks ...

This was good! :D I thought the flow was really nice and you seemed to have many things going for you. The only thing that kind of made it choppy ...

Okay, I'm really nervous because this will be the first poetry I have ever submited on this site. It just kind of came to me and I thought I would ...

This story is getting so deep, Dommy! You really are doing well with this! :D The only thing that kind of bugged me is Ethan’s reaction to the whole thing. ...

Dommy, this was such a good chapter! You really expressed your MC’s feelings in this. I felt so bad for her! And how could her friends just ditch her. She’s ...

I feel really bad about this chapter. It is kind of a wierd twist and let me know if it is too much from the last chapter. Well, hope you ...

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