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Yeah, King, I felt the dream was kind of confusing :? I was slightly put off by it. Like, what exactly was happening? You probably should clear that up for ...

'ello KingKamor! I'm back and ready to read the rest of these chapter. I know you said that these chapters are like a year old but I can't help but ...

Galerius : Okay, I wouldn't say shallow... This kind of just came to me in the middle of a book I was reading and I just decided to post it. ...

Hello, KingKamor. I'm just going to do a chapter-by-chapter review since you posted all of your chapters in one thread. Chapter One : This was a solid beginning. It brought ...

Yeah, JC, this was beautifully written. You really connected with your reader and established a kind of connection with them. You made them feel apart of what you were creating ...

StarDuster : Thank you! :D I'm glad you thought that this was unique. I'm still trying to break away from all the other vampire novels out there and I'm glad ...

Galerius : Thank you for the review. Maybe a bit harsh, but at least you didn't lie to me. Everyone has their opinions and the only way we grow as ...

Maybe we can :wink: Hopefully I can come over! I'll ask right when I get home! Hope to see you soon!

KJ : Thanks, hon, I'm glad you liked it! :D It kind of just came to me one day and I couldn't help but post it! Thanks again!

'ello Kelsey! I see that you have another new story that I'm super excited to read about! I know you won't disappoint :wink: Hehe And you definitely didn't! Omgosh, that ...

Ladydark, you have a good beginning her but unless you are going to continue slightly looses its powerfulness. :wink: I feel like this is a rough sketch of something bigger ...

Night Mistress : Thanks! :D I'm glad this is getting better as the story goes on! Thanks again, Bri!

deavarna_satina : I'm sorry. I feel so bad but I'm so stuck at the present time that I really don't know where to go from here. But I am optimistic ...

deavarna_satina : Gosh, you are so nice! Your reviews made me smile! *beams* Yeah, I can't really share anything with you or it'll ruin it for others. Sorry :? Hope ...

Night MIstress : Yeah, the uniter thing I still have to even out. I will probably be doing another rewrite of this and I'll explain it then. Otherwise, I'll probably ...