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Hey Luc! I'm back and ready to critique! Hope this one is just as helpful as the last one :wink: And I'm afraid it won't be because I found absolutely ...

This was such an adorable idea! I agree with olivia that it was refreshing to find something with morals! :D lol I felt that the emotions you had were very ...

Yup, I agree with the two above comments that I'm pretty much addicted to this story. It is similiar to those action flicks that you watch on TV. :wink: hehe ...

Oh no! What happened to April! :? I really liked her character too... This was an amazing chapter, King! I have no complaints. Everything was so easy to follow and ...

I agree with you, King! This was the most enjoyable chapter for me so far. I love the new addition you made to it. April was such a personal character. ...

Yes, this chapter was depressing, but I felt necessary. You had to descripe the solemn tone of her relationship between her father and herself before you could move on. I ...

ALERT! New story! I know, for those who know me, I should be working on my other main story but I just can't help but post these new ones that ...

Hey, jasmine! Here I am again, reading your unbelievably good story. I know, I dont' have a life on the weekends either lol :wink: My name was scrawled in the ...

Maki-Chan : Thanks, Maki! Yeah, I'm not sure what I want to do yet with that. If I want to start right with this or before or what.... I don't ...

Yeah, King, I liked this chapter. It was so heartfelt at the end. Very cute! :D I would never would have guessed at an abusive father. That was a total ...

Howdy, Icaruss. You know how much I like your work so I couldn't resist when I saw this post. :wink: You’re an asshole. Edward shrugs and tries to listen to ...

Chapter Thirteen!!! Yay!!! *jumps up and down excitedly* I sighed and started pulling at my sweater. “They say that by the time he is middle aged, his brain will work ...

This is an experimental piece. I'm not sure if I want to keep going with it, make it a short story thing, or just stop here. Let me know what ...

deavarna_satina : Thanks, Hailey! :D I know, I have been busy haven't I...? :wink: hehe Yeah, the thing between Sophia and Carmen is still tough because I still want that ...

Hey, Firestalker! You left a comment on my Post Work thread in the group and I'm here answering it :wink: All my comments are in bold, all corrections in red. ...