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KJ I might just have to PM you :wink: lol lucyy : Thanks, luc! :D You always give the nicest reviews! tnme22 : I'm glad you liked this! Thank you ...

All right, this part is way longer than the preface so hopefully more entertaining. Let me know whenever you feel like it is moving too fast or the characters are ...

KJ : Helpful, as usual! :D I am off to edit as we speak! Thanks so much, kels!

Anijumper : Thanks, Anji. :D I'm glad you liked this. And thanks for pointing out those two things. I'll edited it :wink: Angel of Death : Gosh, Angel, you are ...

I know what you are thinking for those of you who follow my work. Not another new story! lol But this one I really do plan on continuing. I had ...

This was good. Your main idea for this was unique and priceless. :D But you missed out on a lot by just us the overall picture. We want to know ...

This is a really cute thought and you have all the right elements for a good story...but something was missing :? I just didn't feel for the MC's as I ...

This version was so much better, luc! No lie! I totally understand why she left now and everything. And it was so cute the comment you put in there about ...

Satina, I thought this was really good, like all your work is. You already know I am a big fan of yours so I'll just cut right to the review ...

I couldn't resist reading all to the way to the end, Angel! :wink: Comments in bold, corrections in red. The Jane Effect By Angel of Death Part 8: Coveted The ...

endless_secrets : Thanks for mentioning some of that stuff. :D First, that guy wasn't Rebecca's mate :? I know that it seems like it and I was really worried about ...

Angel of Death : Thanks! :D Yeah, I really am aiming for unique and different, so if you ever notice anything that screams out to you "Twilight" or something like ...

I'm here, again, Angel, so hopefully this is helpful :wink: Comments in bold, corrections in red. The Jane Effect By Angel of Death Part 7: Flawed Perceptions Just when Andrew ...

Angel, Angel, Angel. You're work is so good that I just can't put down the mouse! I should be sleeping at the present time...but I think I have time to ...

Angel, you know the drill lol :wink: Comments in bold, corrections in red The Jane Effect By Angel of Death Part 5: Palatial Gifts Elizabeth doused the cloth in warm ...