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Venom : Thanks! :D But this is a piece by itself. I just wanted to make this a single, short-story thing so I won't be adding any more to this. ...

Hey, luc! :D Here by request and ready to review! Carefully, the people of New York scanned the headlines, shaking their heads in astonishment: one man killed, leaving his six ...

Chapter six review on it's way! :wink: “I am so sorry Laura; I apologize sincerely for the long wait. If you would please follow me.” Comma after "sorry" “Please.” He ...

Sorsha, you have no idea how excited I got when you PMed me about having chapter five and six up for this story. I couldn't read it yesterday cause I ...

AllyyyAlwayyys : Thanks, Ally! You are too kind :wink: And thanks for pointing out that "he" thing. I usually don't write in third person so this piece I struggled with. ...

Meep(: : Wow, thanks, Meep! You are too nice. I will PM you, I promise! :D Thanks again!

Meep(: : She's talking about a human that she killed in the past, not about Isaac. Sorry that was confusing. I'll fix that up :wink: Thanks for reading!

vampirebloodrace : Thanks! :D Yeah, the first few chapters are like Twilight but otherwise, it doesn't resemble least I hope it doesn't. :wink: Thanks again for reading! Meep(: : Thanks ...

AllyyAlwayyys : Yeah, everyone is saying that. I guess that means I have to up this up :wink: Thanks for reading! :D

AllyyyAlwayyys : Thanks, Ally :D I'm glad you liked it! FreakyDoo12 : Umm, it's like the prologue of this story. It's up on top in related items if you want ...

Hi! I have been looking at this story and kind of reading it for the past few days but I finally have time to read the whole thing. :wink: But ...

Hey, Alice. I don't think I have read any of your work before but I saw this and the title caught my eye. So here I go reviewing! :wink: “Just ...

Hey, playerj09! :D Here I am, ready to review! Comments in bold, corrections in red "My God comma James What are you thinking?", the commander and chief of the United ...

Hey, Mars! Thanks for PMing me about this! :D “Sorry I had to slap you, I was just afraid you were going to start drooling.” Jordan told me as she ...

AllyyyAlwayyys : Thanks! :D Yeah, this is a brand new story for me so just be warned that it is more than a little rough. Well, I'm glad you liked ...