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I see you made Gemma's emotions more known. Very nice :D Well, I'm sorry my reviews aren't long enough. I'm guessing Chapter Twenty is the chapter I haven't read....right? Well, ...

Yeah, and this is Jasper's letter! I'm guessing you just made them smaller, huh? Well, this is as good the second time I read it as it was the first! ...

Yeah....umm....I read this chapter too :? I'm not really sure what's going on here.... I'm sorry...just PM me to tell me if you added chapters or something cause I'm confused... ...

Hey, jazz....I think I'm missing something...:? I've already read this chapter...EEK! Did you like add chapters or make them smaller or something cause I suddenly feel like I am going ...

pshhxhoney : Thanks! :D I guess you will just have to wait for the next chapter to see.... I will PM you when I post chapter four. Thanks again!

In_the_Moonlight : Ah, thanks :D You are too nice. This was a really fun chapter for me to write so I'm glad you liked it.

FreakyDoo12 : You are so lucky my friend knows french...otherwise I would have been clueless to what you said. :wink: But thanks! I'm glad you thought it was good.

omsvmars22 : Hey, you're not being harsh at all. Don't worry. I would rather you point out and pick apart every sentence rather than saying "It was good" and leave ...

Merry_Haven : Yeah, I wanted this chapter to be pretty intense. Descriptions...yes, I struggled with that. Will fix :wink: No, you didn't sound harsh at all. Don't worry :D Thanks ...

Hey, I see that you don't have any reviews for this so ashley to the rescue! :wink: (yeah, I know I'm a dork) The morning was chilly with a slight ...

lucyy : Thanks, bunches! You pointed out so much for me to change and fix. I won't be posting this for awhile cause I'm going to go through this weekend ...

freakydoo12 : Thanks, bunches :D I'm glad you liked this so much. janey : Yes! You totally have to read Twilight !!!!!!! :D But thanks for reading this.

KJ : Shut up...? Okay....*mouths words* Thanks, Kelsey! :D lol *speaks again* I'll just print this out for you soon so you don't have to skim. Thanks again :D

playerj09 : Thanks! :D You are right with the William part. I really enjoy writing his better :wink: Thanks again! jasmine12 : Wow, you are such a big help! :D ...

This is kind of short so if anyone has any comments about my length, I apologize ahead of time. If you have any suggestions to how I can make it ...