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I need this reviewed because it is a contest entry at my school and I dont trust my teacher :D You got it, playerj! I'm ready to review! :D Anne ...

KJ : Thanks for looking at this kels. And I'm glad you liked it :D Will fix the thins you mentions. Thanks again! playerj09 : Thanks for looking at another ...

Wow, this chapter was SO SO SO good, Jazz! :D I loved every minute of it from the video game to the kissing to Nigel, ah, so good :D :D ...

Yes, I know, another new story for those of you who follow my work. But I couldn't help it. I got this idea awhile ago and am just now doing ...

'Ello, Angel! I reread the ending of Chapter 8.1 and I see that you have changed the ending. I like that one a lot better, just so you know :wink: ...

Hey, lucyy! :D Here is my review #2 :D Be warned, I'm am going to be SUPER SUPER nitpicky because this is your second rewrite so...if I sound harsh, I ...

I'm back, Happy! :D 'Mei!' shrieked Jia angrily to her sister, as she stormed in on the girl, who sat cross-legged on the floor tiles reading. I thought "Mei" was ...

Meep(: : Thanks so much! :D I'm sorry about the cliffhanger. I have a tendency to do that, don't I? :oops: Well, I will PM you when I post chapter ...

Writing for love is a pas : Ah, thanks! :D I'm glad you enjoyed this! I will PM you when I post more :wink: pshhxhoney : Chapter Five should be ...

Angel of Death : Your reviews are really helping me keep going. I wrote three pages this weekend so far! And that's a lot for me :wink: Getting closer and ...

Angel of Death : Thanks so much! :D This chapter, again, was a fun chapter to write. I decided to put something in there that other vampire writers haven't touched ...

lakegirls : Thanks! :D I'm glad you enjoyed this so much!

Writing for love is a pas : Thanks! :D I'm glad you liked it!

lucyy : Thanks, luc! :D All will be explained about the pack in the upcoming chapter. :wink:

Hey, Happy! Here and ready to review! :D Her dark brown eyes looked penetrated her blushing sister inquisitively. Oddly worded. Try instead: Her dark brown eyes penetrated her blushing sister ...