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Re: Thou art Ashley...
Hey, Angel lol Yeah, being shy does have its up and downs :wink: _______ Hello, righting! Nice to meet you too! :D
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: Bloodlust Chapter 1 part 2
The whipping started again. The agony of each whip increased twofold each time he whipped me. The pain didn’t subside like it did with the nails and I smelled my ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: In the Eyes of the Deceiver [Preface]
Night Mistress : Yes, you are correct :wink: hehe Well, I'm glad you like this dispite the romance. I'll PM you when I post more! :D Thanks so much for ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: Thou art Ashley...
Well, I've been on this site awhile but never really bothered to come over to the community section...until now :? I know, sounds bad. But I guess I just thought ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Knife of Purest Intent - Chap. 1
I kept this short, because shorter pieces generally lead to more reviews. So I hope you like what there is. If I have enough positive feedback, I'll probably continue... Kels, ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: For a Friend
Cheryl sat on the couch, the worn and ancient book open before her. Her hands trembled as she turned the pages, searching for one certain phrase. It was a thing ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Bloodlust Chapter 1 part 2
Firestalker : It was when she was getting captured...I guess just the air you gave is when it sounded like a boy. Here, I'll just quote it for you :wink: ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: In the Eyes of the Deceiver [Preface]
This is an experimental piece that I decieded to start. I'm not sure if I should continue or not so honest opinions are needed. Happy Reading! **Edited as of Oct. ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough Chapter 1
If Love is not Enough By Angel of Death Chapter 1 October 3, 2007 Izzy stared at the front desk, her eyes mirroring the face of the librarian. I blushed ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: NightBlind, Chapter 3
Hey, King! Saw that you posted another chapter and couldn't resist rushing over to read :D Hopefully this helps :wink: Chapter 3: Vampire The scratching starts again, this time right ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Until The End-Part 3
Yes, for sure now I see that she is living with her Grandma from now on. :wink: It took me a couple of chapters, but I got it hehe Umm, ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Until The End-Part 2
Okay, now I see that she is moving in permantently, right? Hopefully that clears up as I read on :wink: I really found no mistakes again. Your flow and everything ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Until The End-Part 1
This is a cute exchange between grandmother and granddaughter...but I feel like I'm missing something...? In the first part of this, you say her parents are going on a cruise. ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Until The End ~ Preface
I must agree with Bri here, this was very deep, Merry :D I can tell that you learned from your last verse story and changed it here. It flowed so ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: My letter two
As much as I hated school, I hated going home even more. School was my escape from the horrors that [s]waited for me at my house[/s] awaited me there . ...
Oct 26, 2008
