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Okay, for those of you who have been reading my Poisoned Roses piece, this is a COMPLETE rewrite of it. I have decided to start over and make it a ...

Yes, info-dump it was. But I kind of liked it like that :wink: It was an interesting introduction. It kept me wondering about the lives of these four people. I ...

Okay, I'm going to be honest with you, niccy. This whole entire thing is like a remake of Twilight. It's not okay for someone to copy someone else's story so ...

All right, this sounds more like a summary or a preface of a stroy than anything else. I'm sorry but this is WAY too short to be corrected properly. Though ...

I'm so excited to read this! :D I've been waiting for so long! hehe The Jane Effect By Angel of Death Part 9: The Night's End The night had come ...

Well, below is the detailed review but I decided to do a little overall one too, so just bare with me :wink: Plot I felt you had a pretty good ...

Okay, I'm not sure if some of you have seen my Poisoned Roses story posted in Romantic Fiction, but that's where it has been. Now, however, since I'm trying to ...

Nice to meet you, Parade! :D I thought this was a very...interesting sum of yourself :wink: I like how honest you are. Not a lot of people are like that... ...

Merry_Haven : Thanks so much! :D Yeah, I plan to keep going with this so I guess just keep your eyes open for more :wink: Thanks again!

Angel of Death : Thanks Angel :D Yeah, I plan to continue this one, so no worries :wink: Thanks again!

Okay, I tried to base this off of the movie I am Sam . If you haven't seen it, you are being deprived. :wink: Well, I wanted the MC to ...

Kels: I see that people are enjoying this story :D As you already know, I think this is your best story so far that you have ever written. You have ...

I agree with olivia. I think that this was a decent piece. I mean, there are so many directions you could go with this; so many angles, ways, ect. But ...

Yeah, your style is very refreshing! :D No body goes outside the box like you did. I especially like the elusiveness of your characters' names. Just "boy" and "girl" simple ...

All right, Krupp, this seems like a very old-fashioned story; I mean, it has that feel, with the obsessed man and the elusive woman. I thought the style was very ...