ashleylee

Oh jeeze, It seems like all of you are familiar with Storybooks... How do you keep all these characters straight? 'Cause I feel just a tad overwhelmed right now :? ...

Yeah, this was really well written. I enjoyed the drama that you created and the emotions pouring from it. Well Done :D My only worry is that sometimes, the wording ...

Castles, you certainty have a way with words :D I loved every minute of this, from beginning to end. You have a gift, that much is certain. Everything you depicted ...

Wow, I love this! :D The way you capture your MC's voice is amazing. Everything is so raw and lifelike. I can just picture this in my mind, this girl ...

Hi, Liven! Nice to meet you, and Welcome to YWS! :D I see that mizz-iceberg has filled you in on the rules here, so now my only job is to ...

Hola, Bleeding Rose. I've decided to review something of yours since you have been so kind to me in that department :wink: It was a rich man that was lonely. ...

Because deep down in her heart she knows that there’s something there for Mackenzie and because she knows that he won’t hurt her the way James did. Why? What did ...

Yes, I know, I have neglected this story and I'm sorry. I am returning to this so hopefully it wasn't too long of a wait that you all lost interest ...

Hey, Passion. I'm back because your title is so intriging that I couldn't help but check out your next chapter. :wink: “Why should I?” Dorine spat at him. “Why should ...

Hey, Bleeding Rose :D Hopefully this is the write Storybook that you want me to join... I'm new at this so please go easy on me with all the rules ...

Wow, I can definitely tell that you have been working on this, because from the last time I read it, this is much improved. Everything flowed so nicely and I ...

Bleeding Rose, lucyy, Angel of Death, and 200397 : I want to first thank you altogether because all of you are just wonderful. :D :D :D I was so stressing ...

Beside the bed, stood a desk and a simple wooden stool. Use a different word beside "simple". It works against the flow of your story. She lay with her eyes ...

Ribbons of dusty road sprang up and disappeared in the underbrush, connecting each village with the next, with the distant cities, and, ultimately, with a dark and shrouded land known ...

I just love it. "Loved" instead of "love" Putting the key in the ignition, I pushed the heater button on. Pulling the car in reverse, I drove out of the ...