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Hey, Kels! I’m sorry I’m like super late on getting to this, and no I haven’t started on the chapters yo printed out yet but I will after I finish ...

Well, this is the newly rewitten version of my novel, formally known as Poisoned Roses . I have a reason for changing the title and I really hope you all ...

Chapter One: One year previous… “…Back to the street, back to the place Back to the room where it all began Back to the room where it all began Cause ...

Hello, Turntable Jack. I just got finished reviewing your Chapter One of Murder Without Death and to be honest, I think you really need to work on your introduction. The ...

I just put the writing itself. I mean, being able to put down what you want is just a thrill. No body knows how it will turn out, and I ...

Night Mistress : I'm glad you liked this so much :D I'm happy to know that I still can write a decent story! Thanks for taking the time to read ...

** I'm sorry Light_Devil! I know, I'm horrible. I've just been so preoccupied... Well, I can't keep making excuses for myself so I'll just get on with posting :wink: ** ...

Hey, Bri! Here is the promised review, even though it was slow in coming :wink: His black shirt wore out his six-pact and clings to the muscles that ripped down ...

Hey, Castles! Sorry it took me so long to get this this. It seems that a lot of people beat me here, but I'll try to help as best as ...

Yes, please don't be nervous. Most people on here do give constructive critisism and would love to help you grow as a writer. So from now on, don't be afraid ...

Whoa, it seems that Castles got here before me and seemed to have covered everything... but I'll try my best to come up with something :wink: hehe Tenth grade at ...

This is something that I've wanted to try for a while now. I want to write a story from many different views. Of course, there is going to be two ...

**Sorry, I'm kind of late coming in here so just bare with me :?** Yamari Her chest constricted and she nearly lost her composure, gripping the wooden cup in her ...

Thanks, FinalFreedom :D Yeah, I'm only doing one character right now :wink: Umm, BleedingRose, it's anything really that you can tell me. It doesn't matter. I was just curious on ...

Well, I liked the side that you showed. I think most of the comments above caught was I was going to mention, like tenses for instance. What I want to ...