ashleylee

Hey, Joseph. I know, I was slow getting here and I apologize for that. I’ve just been kind of slow in that department. Again, I hope that this is some ...

Well, I just realized that you have edited like the entire thing so I decided to post this useless review anyway and get working on the next one. Sorry about ...

Okay, here's the moment of truth. Either you are going to absoluetly hate this or you'll love it. But please be honest and don't worry about being harsh. I need ...

Hey Merry, I'm back! :D And happy to see that you have edited, knowing that you have returned to the writing world :wink: Back to your review... She leaned over ...

Hey, Castles! Of course I would review this for you. I love reading anything of yours. I am happy to help :wink: When she found out that he was going ...

Hey, Rockon! I got your PM and I checked out your portfolio and I'm guessing this is what you want me to read, right? :D Hopefully I will be some ...

Hey, Nic! Here I am, ready to review. Hopefully it helps! Kassie was waiting for me outside the school gates when I hopped off the bus, the well-irrigated lawn sweeping ...

This is my newest story that I have started, and it is kind of rough, so harsh reviews are welcome :wink: I also haven't written Fantasy Fiction in a while, ...

Where is everyone? People haven’t posted in a long time… Well, I came up with another addition. Hope you don’t mind. Yamari Yamari watched the smoke slowly fade, leaving nothing ...

Sorry, Sorsha, that it has taken me so long to get to this. But hopefully my review is still of some use. Hands ripped open the neck of Louise’s coat, ...

Hey, Angel! :D I feel like I haven’t talked to you in ages. How have you been? Anything new that happened lately? Anyway, I’m not sure if this is a ...

I really am enjoying this story. Everything about it, including the older brother looking out the younger one. Your writing describes everything perfectly. The only thing that kind of bugged ...

Sorry, JosephDean, that it took me so long to get to this. Hopefully I’m not too late in critiquing :wink: Her death was hardest on my brother Jacob. Should be ...

Hey, Merry. I haven’t read anything by you in a long time so hopefully this review will be some help to you. :D I looked over at her, as she ...

KJ, I’ve decided to run by this as well, since I did chapter one too :wink: Lucky for Brad Pitt and Keira Knightly, otherwise neither of them would have made ...