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Hey, Nic. Again, I’m just going to try to point out things that I haven’t noticed before or on the things you have changed. They flanked me on either side ...

Hey, Nic. I just want to thank you right now before I forget for all your super helpful critiques on Poisoned Roses . You have no idea how helpful they ...

Ducati : I finished yours and I'm glad it helped :D cooldude19967 : I did the first two but I'm not sure when I can get around to the rest. ...

Hey, Berry. Before I start on my review, I must remind you that there is a rule here at YWS. You must review two other people's work before you post ...

Hey, don't worry about starting stories thing. I'm not that good at it either :x Disruption boy strode right up to Dougherty's desk, holding out a strong, brown hand for ...

Like tnme22 said, you must follow that rule. It's super important. But, unlike tnme22, I can't resist critiquing your story since I already started :wink: I used to stare at ...

Hey, Demeter. I really need help with a story I'm working on. It's called Poisoned Roses in Romantic Fiction and it is a vampire story. *sighs* I know what you ...

Hey, Ducati! I decided to ask for a favor in return :wink: hehe Okay, I'm not sure if you like vampire stories, but you said you liked Romantic Fiction so ...

All right, this might please some of you who have been wanting some romance in this story. It's not much but it's a start. I'm also really nervous about posting ...

Wow, Cooldude, this is where I praise you. I have found absolutely nothing wrong with this. I just was left astounded. I could never write something nearly as wonderful as ...

Hey, Cooldude. I must warn you that this is my first time editing scripts so just know that you have been forewarned :wink: Oberon: Giving information as if by speech ...

Hey, Meep. I’m back because I really am enjoying this story. Well, hopefully this review helps. I had only been on the job for a week, but was forced to ...

Meep, I read the beginning little blurp and I highty doubt this is poorly written from my past experiences with your writing. So I refuse to believe you and I ...

Okay, I guess I can’t say “sorry I’m late” anymore :wink: But I think I’m actually on time this time :D Scary. That morning I clearly remember wanting that emotional ...

'Ello, Ducati! You are the first person to post on my "Will Review for Food" Thread and I must thank you for asking for my help. I feel special :wink: ...