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YWS Members : Again, to remind you, this was formally known as Poisoned Roses . It has gone under major editing and has a new title. Hope you enjoy it ...

YWS Site Members : Just so you know, this is formally known as Poisoned Roses my work-in-progress novel. I have done some major editing and did a title change. Hope ...

To all YWS readers : I just changed the title and did some major editing with this so hopefully it is better than the previous draft. I hope you all ...

Poppy Mare, I must say, your title caught my attention right away :wink: I looked up from the book and glared at Ben, who interrupted my “personal time.” I held ...

Hey, Olivia. Long time, no talk, huh? =] You could walk past him in the street and not look twice at him. How come? What makes him so invisible to ...

Angels-Symphony : I critiqued your Poem and Novel Start and if you ever need any other advice just let me know and I'll be happy to help =] Wolf : ...

Hey, Ta-mara! :D I must thank you for posting on my “Will Review for Food” thread. I feel honored :wink: hehe One look into murky lake green and you were ...

Hey, Wolf :D Thanks for posting on my “Will Review for Food” thread. I feel honored =) hehe I rip out the page with my drawing and scrawl 'screw you' ...

Hey, Angels-Symphony :D I’m not sure if this is the one you wanted me to read because it says Chapter 22 so I’m slightly confused but I hope I’m right ...

Well, I am not an expert at poetry but the beginning two paragraphs kind of off-ed the beat a little. I feel like you could do better with them, especially ...

**Well, I seem to be kind of late in the whole revision thing but hopefully my review still counts for something :? I'm sorry, Scasha, that it took me so ...

Hey, Joseph. I know you keep saying that this is probably no better than the last but I have faith in you as a writer. You are a good one ...

Hey, Sunny, I’m back for more. I couldn’t resist rushing over here to continue reading :wink: And wow, I found absolutely nothing wrong with this. You had all the elements ...

Vampire novel =) Oooo, you know I love those :wink: He had always disliked moving, and now that the move was from on country to another, that detestation intensified. I ...

Yeah, new chapter! :D I could tell Kassie had begun familiarising herself with Michael again, but I could see it in her eyes that she was only doing it to ...