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Kels: I printed the rest out so you get to read what I have so far at school on Monday! So, go ahead and feel even more spoiled! :D lol ...

Wow, this is SO much easier to read now that you spaced it out! :D Okay, I just copy/pasted it and put all my corrections in bold, So, here is ...

Melkor: Okay, I started this but now, my parents are saying that I have to get off the internet. Ugg, and your story was just getting good! So yeah, you ...

Hello, I must say that this story was immensely interesting! Your little blurb before I started reading, explaining the "round the bend" saying really caught my attention. Plus, the whole ...

Decided to copy/paste again. Hope you don't mind...:? Well, here I go :D Chapter Two Noise. That’s what woke me up. A large clang sounded near my eardrums and I ...

Scasha: Hey! :D I finished posting my review. It is up above in the post I did before. ^^^^ Hope it helped :wink:

I decided to copy/paste this. Easier to read and Easier to correct! :wink: Chapter One “Melody”. I froze, my heartbeat quickening as I glanced from side to side. I wasn’t ...

Thanks, Scasha: Yeah, my mom said that about my writing when I was talking to her about it tonight. She says I over do it sometimes. And, I think I ...

Seshat77: Thank you :oops: I'm flattered. That was a really nice comment. Of course I will PM you when I post more! Which should be soon :wink: I am correcting ...

Esme: Okay, the reason my chapters have gotten shorter is because I've had people complain that, for they were longer before, it was too hard for them to read. I ...

Esme: Thank you again. I know. I will try harder with this chapter to emphasize things more. I am rereading my work as we speak so hopefully I will post ...

Very Good! I loved your descriptions. And your story is so different and unique that it kept me reading. So you score tons of points there! :wink: You caught my ...

Here's my review! Sorry it took so long... The roads covered with patches of ice, the trees sat in a never-ending death, nothing moved. Nothing stirred it was quiet Okay, ...

Esme: Wow...wow...WOW! Thank you SO much! That was an awesome review! You helped me so much! I'll go to correct everything I can as soon as possible and thanks for ...

Hey, I'm copy/pasting again! It was a peaceful, silent, autumn day. The leaves were abandoning their homes and gently gliding to the ground. [