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Re: -Inconcessus- Twenty-One
Wow, I haven't been on this site in FOREVER! Well, I really want to start writing again (after my almost two month break :?) and this is what I came ...
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: I missed having you in my bed.
Very VERY unique! I never saw that one coming and i was a little nervous to click on this cause of the title. I loved how I didn't see it ...
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: Already Gone [1]
I finally broke free of my writer's block and started this. However, I don't really like it yet. I'm excited about the idea but the writing is just... bad, to ...
Aug 14, 2009 -
Re: Long Shot {1}
Well, I guess I'm finally trying to get this idea off my chest. Mind you, this is extremely rough and I don't like the beginning. However, I'm giving it my ...
Aug 10, 2009 -
Re: I Promise, But I Lie (1)
“So it worked, then,” he whispered. We were at a movie outside in the park. They project the movie on the huge brick wall of town hall. The only problem ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: Addicting Poison - Chapter 9
Oh Goodie! :D I'm glad you decided to keep posting on here! And where have you been all this time... I feel like I haven't talked to you in forever! ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Twenty-One
Well, here is the next chapter. I still don't like the direction my writing is going so hopefully you all have some advice for me because I'm lost. Comments are ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: Time Dissolves Itself [2]
There's not much I can say about this chapter except its a new concept for me to write about. I know its not the greatest and needs some work so ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: Eff.
I find this really brave of you to tell everyone about your own experiences and be honest and trust everyone to either accept or either be nice with their comments. ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: The Bedside Reminder
Hmmm, I don't really know what I think of this, to be honest. I mean, some parts were really good, like the ending. Very powerful. But at the same time, ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Another Teen Pregnancy Story, Part 2
Allrighty, this chapter was just as good as the last one but... where does this connect?? I thought Mick was at the beach watching Kat run a surfing school and ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Another teen pregnancy story:)
Hola! I've been seeing this story and I finally have the time to check it out :wink: On with the review! “What the hell are you talking about?” I’m standing ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Your Pretty Blue Sundress
'Ello! I am Ashleylee and I'll be your reviewer today :D The first shy rays of sunlight are starting to peek out from behind clouds, casting upon your face. This ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Brian's Eyes
Allrighty, this was good but it could be better. First off, the cliche portion was way up there. Everything from the girl on the outside looking in to the sweet, ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Twenty
Loyal YWS Readers and Review-ers : I want to thank you all for all the support on this chapter. I decided to change it a bit because I know that ...
Jul 15, 2009
