ashjoy7

“That’s not what I said.” The cat still purred, rubbing his velvety neck across my leg. “Yes. You did.” I crossed my eyes at Markus as he gave me his ...

Your writing is very detailed. I kind of got confused though. You didn't really explain what happened to the main character. Only one sentence described how they died, and then ...

Good characterization! I already know a ton about Reece and Alissa's relationship. I liked the flashback too, it was put in the perfect place. I could almost see it in ...

You use "it" a lot. I like how you elaborate though, I can relate.

The cold came, invaded, and lived in my skin like a pleasant parasite. I didn’t mind it. Like a film of waxy paper it coated my hands; lacing my fingers ...