ashjoy7

This reminded me sort of a movie I just watched, um, "Somthing Borrowed" I think. This kind of love is the kind where if you love the person you love ...

I can relate to your poem. When I was younger, from preschool right up to the brink of middle school, I was a spaz. Life was fun and I didn't ...

The clouds, the sky, the lights, the warm; It all seems trivial. Finding different ways, in which, To fill empty time. Darkness creeps into my vision, Blurry. Nothing, nothing. Forgetfulness, ...

If you've never heard "Pictures at an Exhibition" by Mussorgsky, I'd definitely recommend it for inspiration. It is a classical piece which some people don't respond to well, but classical ...

Holy cow! This was good, real good. A piece like this flows, it's got a very significant theme, and it's got a irony. I have only a few suggestions, most ...

His eyes were weary, underneath overbearing eyebrows. For a moment I could see fear in those eyes; my father never showed his emotions. His fingers nervously grasped the iron stoker, ...

Overall I liked this piece. I thought the characters were clear and they had interesting personalities. I get what you're trying to do, and writing with a purpose is probably ...

I was born in a family where much was expected. My father was the Duke of Naman, one of the biggest provinces of Galean. My mother was nonexistent. I did ...

Photography is so cool! This makes me want to take some pictures! I like the first one and the third the best. I'm not sure why either. The first was ...

Dang. That was pretty epic. The whole thing had a heavy, mysterious, melancholy, almost revengeful tone. I kind of feel the need for this story to continue on. Are you ...

I really like your writing style. You have great description and use vivid imagery to get across a mental image. The begining was great, I liked how it was a ...

Haunted houses and dares are a little overdone, but you managed to make it interesting. I agree that you sounded a little like you moved from ghost stories to environmental ...

My name was Uday Salah. It meant to rise above; it meant righteousness. Now it means that I am a terrorist. My name is Arabic asshole now. I climbed out ...

Creepy much. That was great. I like the whole demon thing. I like how the main character is tough but also is weak (the retching at the end, hates killing ...

I have one question. What happened to make two "dignified teachers" get so grrrrr. Were they fighting over somthing, or someone? I guess the title kind of helps in that ...