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Thanks!

Thanks very much! I thought at times that it was confusing who was the speaker, but I couldn't think of a way to clarify it without going out of the ...

Yeah, the rational part of my brain knows about the its/it's distinction, but that often goes to sleep when I'm writing. Thanks for pointing it out. My idea was that ...

Well you're very welcome to have a go at writing something yourself with these ideas, if you want to run away from them. I'm not particularly active on fictionpress, I ...

Thanks so much! In terms of making it longer, I was thinking that at some point it could work well as a short play, but even for that it would ...

Thanks so much for your kind words! For the moment, this is as far as I'm going to go with this particular story, but I'll definitely be writing more about ...

Thanks very much!

Thanks very much!

Thanks very much for the review! I'm really embarrassed now about the whole talking to the changeling thing. That was a massive oversight. You're definitely right that I have problems ...