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I am a little supportive of IcyFlame here. The use of abstract words was brilliant and you do not see much of it in poetry, or is that just me? ...

I personally like the way your poem had started with the I am a freak. verse. It was very straightforward and took the reader right to the point of what ...

I haven't read many poems of this length, so bravo on pulling it off and keeping it interesting throughout! One thing that made this work three-dimensional for me was the ...

Very eloquent and beautifully written. Expresses the way humans want to belong to something more, be loved by someone else, and wanted as well. Before you mentioned that "Mom said ...

To be totally honest, I didn't really understand the interpretation of this poem...but it was very interesting to read and try to decode all of the words. It had a ...

Wow. The poem is very real and artistic. The feelings this poem gives to the readers is astounding. I particularly like this verse: but with words heard, but not said ...

This story captured the emotion that the young girl felt for her grandmother and the rocking chair. It was actually very moving to read. I liked reading this a lot. ...

I have to agree with BlueAfrica. In her current condition, it seems very unbelievable that she is able to raise a gun, shoot perfectly without any side effects (i.e. ears ...

My favorite thing about the story was probably how Emma saw people, red or blue. That was the most fascinating on how she kept repeating how much she liked or ...

It seems like this particular piece just flows well. As if the words just came to you all at once and you wrote them down. The imagery was very amazing! ...

I have never seen a poem as short as this one, but it captures so much emotion in it. You can tell RIGHT away what the speaker feels just of ...

Beautiful poem! The imagery was wonderful, and your wording was very eloquent :] In this poem, you can actually feel the emotion swirling in the words. The poem created a ...

I could see where the plot of the story was going, but I thought it moved a little slow. The dialogue was actually very thorough, which I liked very much. ...