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Very eloquent and beautifully written. Expresses the way humans want to belong to something more, be loved by someone else, and wanted as well. Before you mentioned that "Mom said ...

To be totally honest, I didn't really understand the interpretation of this poem...but it was very interesting to read and try to decode all of the words. It had a ...

Wow. The poem is very real and artistic. The feelings this poem gives to the readers is astounding. I particularly like this verse: but with words heard, but not said ...

Captures the simplicity of nature's beauty. Not sure what the dots are on the closest, blurry leaf in the background, but I like it either way. :D

This story captured the emotion that the young girl felt for her grandmother and the rocking chair. It was actually very moving to read. I liked reading this a lot. ...

I'm working on a novel and I try to write at least 4-5 pages a day. Sometimes, I work on poems very few times during the week, but they're very ...

...You just blew my mind. O.o

I have to agree with BlueAfrica. In her current condition, it seems very unbelievable that she is able to raise a gun, shoot perfectly without any side effects (i.e. ears ...

My favorite thing about the story was probably how Emma saw people, red or blue. That was the most fascinating on how she kept repeating how much she liked or ...

It seems like this particular piece just flows well. As if the words just came to you all at once and you wrote them down. The imagery was very amazing! ...

This is possibly the shortest short story I've ever written, but this is also the first abstract short story I've ever written. This is just my second post, so critique ...

I have never seen a poem as short as this one, but it captures so much emotion in it. You can tell RIGHT away what the speaker feels just of ...

Thank you Audy and Soulkana for the improvement advice :] I don't think I'll edit this one, so I can have this as a reminder of my first work here, ...

Beautiful poem! The imagery was wonderful, and your wording was very eloquent :] In this poem, you can actually feel the emotion swirling in the words. The poem created a ...

Feel free to review as critically as you wish :] This is my first submission here, so sorry if it kind of sucks xD Anything from grammar correction to possible ...