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This actually reminded me of something I once wrote way back when... I liked how all the stanzas and verses were very direct. The way you write it does NOT ...

I've had this idea for a small short story, but I never got down to any specifics, and it seemed a pain to just figure everything out. So I decided ...

Any ideas for plot twists or subplots are welcomed. If there is any confusion behind any replies within the Storybook, feel free to talk about it here. :] Try to ...

Hiness!! I'm new too!!!! I love Marching Band, Jazz Ensemble, Woodwind Choir, Steel Drums and my band! :D You seem like my kind of friend xD I love Marching Band, ...

First thing I need to point out: the vocabulary. Loved it! Not to many lengthy words that you need to use a dictionary for, but it is not limited to ...

Brilliant essay. I really have nothing to say about the deduction of words; I have the same problem with writing essays. One thing I would like to point out was ...

This is just an abstract story I started at school one day due to boredom. I don't know where I plan to go with this, I might make a small ...

Regardless of it being as short as it is, it is very good! It is very abstract, but well written. This reminds me of a girl who realizes she has ...

Excellent poem! The emotions you get from the poem are, I felt, implied subtly rather than saying, "I am worried that your kindness will go away in the future. I ...

Thought I'd write something un-love related that I'd submit here. Hope you enjoy it. I've taken this from my own experience with losing a dear friend to peer pressure. Things ...

Very true. I think most people do know this is an issue, but I do not know what is actually being done by this. Not that I am disagreeing with ...

All I have to say is amazing! The first sentence makes the reader stop and think, "What sounds like the ocean?" Very good hook at the beginning. Perhaps the smooth ...

I am a little supportive of IcyFlame here. The use of abstract words was brilliant and you do not see much of it in poetry, or is that just me? ...

I personally like the way your poem had started with the I am a freak. verse. It was very straightforward and took the reader right to the point of what ...

I haven't read many poems of this length, so bravo on pulling it off and keeping it interesting throughout! One thing that made this work three-dimensional for me was the ...