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Couldn't think of a more creative title, so went with a classic. For my reviewing style, I'm pretty nit-picky. Grammar, structure suggestions, what to take out, what to add in, ...

I was listening to "Toxic Valentine" by All Time Low, and it inspired this story. I had multiple endings for this, but the one that is written seemed to just ...

Great imagery! Your words were very poetic and eloquent. There were some spots where I felt they didn't connect or flow as well as it could have, though. Plus, some ...

This is another poem I worked on for the Writing Club in my school. We're still on the topic of imagery, but we're trying to make everything flow better at ...

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This is for my Creative Writing Club at school. We're working on imagery, and our prompt was to write about something descriptively but NOT reveal what it is. I'll just ...

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You're very good at rhyming without it being forced and keeping a uniform structure. But it's poems as artfully constructed as these that make you want to know more. By ...

Excellent poem! You conveyed the emotion very well! Now let's get nit-picky... First, without quoting anything, I've noticed that in most of the poem, the beginning of each verse was ...

I was listening to "Iodine" by Icon For Hire while writing this, so I guess you could say that the song influenced this piece. This is probably the most uniform ...

Very impressive piece, especially since there are so little words and verses in each stanza. Love the rhyme scheme. Made one grammar mistake... I feel no cold, I fell feel ...

There you are, caught in a predicament. I don't find this bizarre, especially since I was in it. There you are, spinning your web of lies. I thought you knew ...

The amount of fascination I have can only be compared to the amount of confusion I have as well... All I can really get from this was there was someone ...

Very amazing. I thought of Deepavali while I was reading this, since it was yesterday where I live. When I saw the footnote at the bottom, I was thrilled to ...

I would like a spot as a college age Plursych female. Done. Get the name of your character down and I'll put you on the list.