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Isaura; I stared at her in shock, completely forgetting my second tea. She came back to get over Andy's death? If it were me experiencing grief such as her's, I ...

Isaura; My eyes were wandering all over the place. "Man, this place is so huge." I kept thinking to myself. My gaze dropped down to the parking lot and I ...

Raymond; I chuckled lightly as I took the last cup. "Yes, please. Thank you." I grinned at Sunny, then turned to Rose. "That's be pretty cool. This reminds me of ...

Isaura; Her reply was no shocker to me; I wouldn't come back either, but I would have said something. But she was holding something back. "Until what? What made you ...

Raymond; I smiled at Sunny. "Raymond Dale. Pleased to meet you both." I said with a small laugh. "Of course! You'll be the first to know." I replied enthusiastically, my ...

Isaura; I motioned Mike for another hit of my drink. Once he slid it down the counter to me, I took a sip and exhaled loudly. "How about we start ...

Raymond; I smiled at the thought of someone else wanting my opinion on anything - and writing! Who'd have thought? Certainly not me. "I'd say try everything first. But don't ...

Isaura; I slowly nodded, taking in another breath of my spiced tea. "A lot is an understatement, Rose." I said calmly. Where had she been all this time?! One of ...

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Raymond; I blinked at the sudden arrival of the girl and her and Sunny's quick back-and-forth conversation. Regaining my composure, I replied, "It's about a boy who's orphaned and can't ...

Isaura; I blinked at the sudden subject change. I wanted to question her further, but knew that probably wouldn't get me any answers. "I'm good." I said, recomposing myself. "I ...

Raymond; I smiled, looking up briefly when I saw another girl walk in through the door. "It's about a young boy who can't read or write. He's an orphan and ...

Isaura; "Of course you can!" I smiled in return, embracing her with my free arm. "How've you been, Rose? I haven't seen you around town for so long!"

Isaura; I smiled to myself as I sipped my drinks. The little girl was very adorable.

Isaura; I nodded, running my fingers through my escaped bangs coming out of my long, black ponytail. "Do you live around here?" I inquired, pulling out my money to pay ...