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  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: This Business of Love (Chapter 5: The Clown, Experimenting)

    With hopes that the B-man will show up, I review this piece as well. This caught my attention right off the bat. With each vicious swing, Tina winced and the ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: This Business of Love (Chapter 4: Two Unstoppable Forces Meet)

    Joker!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Harley!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, my fangirling is done. I don't know about you but I'm feeling 22 but I when write fanfiction it's just for fun, so I'm not

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Shaping Faith: Chapter 6, Part 2

    Hola, happy review day. So, I haven't read the previous chapters, which understandibly left me a little confused at the beginning. I thought this was a fantasy novel because it ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Melding - Chapter Three

    Hey there, happy review day! I love the letter at the beginning. It was hilarious. And I could totally picture some pompous elven scholar writing it. Even though he sounds ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 2, Part 1 (Untitled)

    Hey fellow team member! Sorry, I haven't read the previous chapters, the points from the green room are just too alluring... Anyway, let me say that even though I haven't ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 9.1

    I'm going to skip my usual apologetic preamble and just jump right into it. Review day for the win. Nitpicks: Even though I know that distraction leads to disaster, I ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 8

    Hey look, I'm back! Slowly but surely I'm getting through this. All I've got for this chapter are little stylistic/grammar things, nothing major. “You used a Tedui Stone? Are you ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 7.2

    Man, this game is intense. Sometimes I think these guys take "taking it to far" to a whole new level. That's good though. it makes for a good story. I ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 7.1

    Once again I'm scraping the bottom of the barrel for things too say. I was definitely entertained by their interactions, as well as super annoyed at Brady. Also, what the ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 6.2

    Hey Wolfare! Since it's review day I couldn't quite read the other reviews, so hopefully I'm not repeating too much. I'll try not to be a broken record with the ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 6.1

    Still not dead. Granted it's been like a half an hour. The real test will be if I come back tomorrow. xD For whatever reason I was super paying attention ...

    May 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 5

    Looks who's back! I told you I'd be reading this to the end, and I intend to keep that promise, because even though I'm really good at dying, and I'm ...

    May 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 4

    Hey Wolfare! I'm so sorry it took me so long. Between school, work, and killing my laptop... life's been great. I want to let you know that I'm definitely reading ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (part 8b/8)

    Ugghh... I can already feel my dread mounting as I stare at the words that mark the end of my journey, the pre-depression depression, if you will. At the same ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (part 8a/8)

    Hey, it's me. Happy Review day! I know it's taken me a while. To be honest I hate endings, so I was delaying the inevitable. I was depressed for three ...

    Feb 22, 2015


Poetry lies its way to the truth.
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