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Re: Stranger
The most unexpected ending of a poem I have ever read. I was so shocked, I read it like three times just to make sure I'd read that last line ...
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Re: TAKERS - Prologue
My belief on a prologue is this; It's there to introduce the story, but if it's only used if the introduction doesn't fit with whatever comes next in the story, ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Legacy chapter one
it starts out as a romance, which I why I put it here, I hoped to move it a way from the lovey stuff and introduce some other major themes ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: um....
I wish it was my real name, but sadly, it's just my online name. I love Greek mythology, Artemis is my favorite Goddess.
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Ocean song
The waves crash Their rhythm constant, a steady beat spilling out on the shore a tremor of fury underlying each pattern of crests Yet there is a calmness, in the ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Ice
It's not really a matter of being short, so much as whether or not it said everything you wanted to say. It felt complete to me as a reader, but ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: um....
For all intents and purposes, I'm Artemis. I loved to read my whole life, and I'm just opening up my world to writing too. I love writng novels, but I'll ...
Jul 6, 2011
