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this was loosely inspired by Evanescence's Haunted[url][/url] My heart pounded. Fear pulsed through my veins and consumed my soul until it was all I could do to keep from losing ...

wow. I was only going to read half but there was no way I could stop. your writing is beautiful and conveyed her emmotion exquisitely. your build up was extremely ...

I've always been a fan of those 'outside the box" writing styles, and this one certainly is unique. Just one thing I want to look at. Marco: They say I’m ...

I listen too symphonic metal mostly. I listen to rock too, but since it was grouped with pop I had to stay away(i'm very anti pop, I can't even say ...

First of all to anyone who commented on chapter one, thanks. I'm still working on incorporating all of your wonderful feedback, but I wanted to post another chapter, so here ...

thanks. I was kind of going for cheesy romantic at the beginning there. Originally I had all the flashbacks in italics, so they looked like flashbacks, but I was having ...

I wish i could write like this. The way your narrate is so unique, I love it. Pretty much everything I wanted to say has already been said, though even ...

Your poem has a lot of ideas broken up over lines. While this is sometimes annoying, you totally pulled it off. I truly enjoyed reading this. Someone already said this, ...

Did you really just end there? You are a cruel individual. I loved your beginning! I was hooked from the start, and due to your superb writing I only became ...

In the beginning it was kind of just...random, but it kept getting stronger and stronger as you went along. By the end I was completely breathless(figuratively). It ended up being ...

Was given the topic, planting flowers, and this is what I came up with! this has been edited somewhat significantly, so this is sort of like a version 2 The ...

Awesome story! just a few little things. Even though with-in certain areas a slice of heavenly blue peeked out. I think it would sound better if you reversed it Even ...

At first I thought she was talking to the actual moon. Is this really a journal entry, or just what she's thinking in her head? I think it might be ...

sorry for the typo, and thanks so much for the reviews.

Alone A common word A known word But only those Who have felt its touch Truly understand The pain It’s a cage Or window That’s been shut For eternity Hiding ...