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Re: WHAT!?
AHHHHHHHHHH.....what he said
Aug 12, 2006 -
Re: Unexpected Hatred
Thanks for all your help. And Bringin back sexy, The mother is soposed to talked that way, It goes with the plot of the story. Although i see what you ...
Jul 28, 2006 -
Re: Unexpected Hatred
Chapter 1 The night was hot, but beautiful. The dark night sky filled to capacity with stars, and the moon shinning brighter than I can ever remember. My seven-teen year ...
Jul 24, 2006 -
Re: Diplomacy
Umm what more can be said? Other than i liked it, and agree with gummy
Jul 23, 2006 -
Re: the beauty is in the tragedy
Umm, you know i hate that i havent been "ontop" of reading on YWS because once i get to it, all that needed to be said has been said. But ...
Jul 23, 2006 -
Re: dirty dancing
I really love this poem too. Like Gummyface said the lines where swift, and discriptive. And showed that dancing was meaningful to you.
Jul 23, 2006 -
Re: A quick, penned thank you
OK, I just posted on another poem of yours and told you that i havent read anymore of yours, well now i have. I really like this poem too. When ...
Jul 23, 2006 -
Re: Pen Marks on Wine Glasses
I really liked your poem. I havent read your other poems so i can not compare. Though i do like that this poem is very clear with showing emotion. Great ...
Jul 23, 2006 -
Re: Soul Dance: Now Revised
Umm yeah, i found that if you read a poem after lots of people have replied, they usally have said all that needs to be said and i just starts ...
Jul 23, 2006 -
Re: Don't leave..
I liked this and i think they both said it all.
Jul 23, 2006 -
Re: ALLO
Hey Im the artist formally known as prince...LOL JK...what I really am... Hey Im the member formally known as Soleil2005
Jul 23, 2006 -
Re: Slow Down
I dont usally say things about poems to people well because im better at stories than i am at poetry and reading my stories that means most my poems stink.....but ...
Apr 29, 2006 -
Re: first part of a story...I hope
I dont know it was just there i probably clicked it on an acident...idk ohh well thank you!! :D
Apr 29, 2006 -
Re: first part of a story...I hope
The night was cold, but the air was warm. The dark sky was filled to capacity with stars. The moon was shinning brighter than I have ever seen it. Joy ...
Apr 29, 2006 -
Re: Should I continue/ start to write this story??
I will most definatly keep that in mid wile I continue to write. Thank you for your advice! :-)
Apr 12, 2006
