armonia

I like this. It makes me want to know what comes next. Thats what I really look for in a story.

Great its totally strange. and written great. (unlike that sentance)

I like it, now im not one to tell you any actually fixure uppers like sentance structure or what nots. beacuse if there is once thing im REALLY bad at ...

How can i put this...LOOOVVEEE IT! Thats all there is to it

She runs though the sky, tired but determined. As though free of the world she forgets the suffering and pain she has enflicted upon her own town and family. The ...

If i were a flamingo. I'd eat with my lips, And stand on all fours. I'd live in the desert, and drink from the forest. When the sun went down, ...

kool. i liked this alot.

Sun you are so shinny. You remind me of a new clean dime, in the middle of the night. I wish i were just like you, yeah i do.

hey thanks to the both of you. Im going back to day and writing a revise than i'll post it and see if thats anybetter.

Karen A. Lindsay. No one knows what the A stands for but there are many rumors. They call her Kal. She is the most feared of my kind, the strongest, ...

I like this alot. good use of rythm

I liked it, it was good. thought i too got lost in some places.

Ok i have to say that i really like this poem too. As has been said. Im not sure of the meaning. But still i liked it.

I agree, it does flow better. I like it. good job

Yeah what he said, Other than that i'd have to say i like it alot.