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Wow!! That was awesome. I can't draw very well so I'm like so jealous. LOL :wink: I really like the 3rd picture. I think the pen kind of threw it ...

Alexi Alexi recognized this young man as her boyfriend. At first she smiled at the sight of him, but then her face fell as he collapsed to the floor. She ...

Alexi Alexi rounded the corner after say 'hi ' to the manager and grabbed her apron off the nail in the kitchen. She grabbed her butcher's knife and spatula and ...

Name: Alexi Giovanni (female) Age: 16 Occupation before infestation: Pizza Hut chef Skill(s) or talents: can sing and is an exceptional cook Physically: shoulder length, blond highlighted cappuccino,

It seems kind of abrupt to me. You are kind of rushing things along when Elizabeth is describing herself. What do her friends look like? What do her class rooms ...

It wasn't bad. There were some parts that I didn't totally agree with but I didn't dislike them enough to post them. Other than that, not bad!

August 24, A.D. 79 A deafening boom roars through Pompeii's crowded marketplace. The ground shakes violently throwing the midday shoppers off balance and toppling stands of fish and meat. People ...

I can't draw but I can pick out flaws when I see them. Bella: -her head is just a bit big compared to Edward's -her eyes are a little off ...

This is a great picture. 10/10 in my book. It is simple but exotic. I'm not sure I've ever seen a picture so big.

Jesus! I don't think I've ever seen one that big!! :shock:

I've edited the story so if you would please read over it again and tell me what you think!

I understand. But I'm not that good at it yet. This is only my first song I've ever written. I'm not to concerned about it. I would be more concerned ...

I realize in the first verse I say you alot. If you would please throw out some ideas on how I could change it. ________________________________________________________________________________________

this is a very good start! Realizing she was till awake, the man turned her over and began punching her over and over again I agree with chichi on this. ...

This was really good. You said that you were afraid to post this,...... well don't be. You have a good start to a possibly publishable story one day. I didn't ...