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Alice Marie had a late start Friday morning. She hadn't slept much the previous night and hadn't heard her alarm buzz at 7:30 that morning. By the time she awoke ...

Hope you don't mind if I join Name: Alice Marie Randazzo Age: 17 Gender: Female Appearance: Ivory-skinned, dark brown, wavy hair near the middle of her back. Big dark eyes,high ...

OKay well u really need to read the first oart in order to understand everything. I would have written more but I got too tired and couldn't write anymore. So ...

Okay before starting, just letting you know that the 1st part of this story is in fantasy fiction. The main character is a little over emotional. The beginning of this ...

Thanks guys! That felt good to be complimented on something like that cuz on all of my other stories, people usually rip them to shreads. I thought about Romantic Fiction ...

This maybe tough. I'm sure by the end of the 1st paragraph that you will start to figure things out. As I laid there, sweating in bed, my partner leaned ...

Umm.... it is really short. I would maybe go back and fill out your characters more too.... and add a few things here and there because it sounds very rushed ...

Okay. I like this story. I think it has a lot of potential, but you really need to fill out your characters more. They are sort of..... boring to read ...

Okay. I really liked this story. I didn't read any of the other reviews so if I repeat anything I'm sorry. :arrow: FIRST OF ALL: 'I dreaming I was wandering ...

PLEASE. I have no idea what to do for a title for this story. Does anyone have any ideas? *** Snap ! Emily whirled around to see her friend Carter ...

PROBLEM!!! this story isn't doing so hot! (sorry to point out the obvious) It could run the risk of being deleted! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, post on here again. if you ...

Hey dragnet! I haven't heard from you in a while. Now about your story. I liked it, a lot. One thing I have to say is, you have Matt sighing,..... ...

Okay! I really like this story. The only thing I have to complain about is the last paragraph. The trasition was a little weird between "Finally Mom found me", and ...

Okay. First of all I really like tis story. But you need to be a little more descriptive. My dad always tells me, "If you are not sure descriptive enough, ...

These are really pretty. I really like the black & white ones. I think the frst one si my favorite. *Archer*