aquinas1991

really good story especially the symphony bits :D

Chapter 1 I was so bored , my mum Had given me yet another lecture which I of course did not listen to And I had yet more maths homework. ...

Ok you're doing a lot wrong here. Slipping between past and present tense, first person point of view, capitalizing stuff in the middle of was ridiculous. Get a grammar book ...

I was so bored , my mum Had given me yet another lecture which I of course did not listen to And I had yet more maths homework. “What is ...

A boy about the age of 12 was being driven by his personal chiefer. named ______ . He was on his way to meet his dad and mom at there ...

Ok, this is the first part of Derren's story. I am having different stories of the characters and tying them together at the end of the middle or at the ...