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I really enjoyed you're plot, and I look forward to reading more. :D Don't be insulted by my nitpicking. I really like the story, and want to help you polish ...

This is a great addition to you're first chapter. :) I did notice that this, My heart skipped a beat and I felt an odd, warm sensation shape at the ...

It's an excellent poem. :) :) :) The only thing is, Look at the starving children,Look at them fall,Look as we starve ourselves,Just to fit a small. It took me ...

It's awesome! You did a way better job than I would have. I stink at drawing...alot. :D Just one thing. Why is there a tree on the roof? (At least ...

Other than editing old poems, this is the first poetry I've written recently. I appreciate reviews. My poetry definitely needs improvement. :D I edited. (thanks for the reviews) I'll finish ...

They're both beautiful. I really like the first one, but it's hard to decide between the two. :D Which do you like better personally?

I think your photo of the bridge was breathtaking, Your others were great too, but that was the best. The posts before me are right. It looks great in black ...

Wow. This sounds interesting. I hope you continue. I noticed a couple of tings, but other than this it looks good. Glass walls, ceiling, and floor, gave the impression that ...

A fairy can also be called a faery, faerie, fay, or fae. :) I always have difficulties with forcing my rhymes. Thanks for the reviews!

It's kind of short, but I'm posting it anyways. Criticism makes things better. I'd appreciate it. :D :wink: Violet eyes were watching me They bore into me and made my ...

The chemicals caused a mutation because the scientist in charge made a mistake.

Wow! I con honestly say that there's not really anything that I can nitpick about this. It's well written. It caught my attention in the beginning, and kept it. Job ...

I wrote this several years ago, but I still like it. I'm not really any good at poetry. Criticism is appreciated. :) :D Did you see the rose petal in ...

This sounds like a great story plot. It's a little like the giver, but it works. I have a couple of nitpicks, but you did a great job. Make it ...

I really like the twist right here. :shock: Tried to kill her one night. Someone was killed , alright. She was found alive. And he was found dead. Lucky , ...