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Re: deleted
Hiya, Me and my friends read this script out loud and we all literally laughed out loud! We didn't really get it but thought it was really funny. We hope ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: My guardian dog (Edited!) OLD
Hiya, I couldn't find any mistakes in this and I loved it. My favourite character was Riley as my auntie used to have a dog that matches his description but ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: The Animal princess (1)
I enjoyed this and think some of your ideas are interesting. I especially liked the slight humour you used at one point my favourite was this piece and sadly her ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: One stupid mistake
One stupid mistake 'I would like to meet you today,’ Joe told me on MSN. This was to be our first date. 'Where?' I typed back. 'The beach, will you ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Golden Locks
Thanx for your reply and I really liked the example you gave it's helped alot
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Golden Locks
Golden Locks David watched the girl passing alongside his car, her golden locks bounced as she skipped along happily - unaware. She reminded him of his daughter Lorna, he loved ...
May 24, 2009
