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I am scared. Running like hell and scarred. I seem to be running away from the fact that people have it so much worse than I do, I am finding ...

Love sucks. Its not real and it sucks. Learn this now. I did. As bad as we want it love isn't all its cracked up to be. It is what ...

She smiled at him closed her eyes. you need to add an and in between him and close It doesnt make any sense without it. You could also be more ...

This is a very good story. It is very well formated and it is powerful. Try not to put things in () it makes it more personal when you don't. ...

Chapter 2 “Shelly! Here girl!” I had cried out in fear. Horrible thoughts drifted into my mind. What if she was killed? What if I never found her? Then I ...

Please do not give up on this it is really good. I love the way you described your situation. [quote]I never could see what my best friend saw in him ...

I really like the story. It is very suspenseful there are a few grammar errors. Other than that it is really good. I hope there is another part. Mr. Gregory ...

Hi Evi, I absolutly love your story. It had an intresting hook. I couldn't stop reading it. The title was what really got me. Write more, i want to hear ...

Chapter 1 Through out your life you see, hear, and learn many things. Destined from they day you are born to the day you must die, you get curios. Through ...

Wow. I luv it but more description about Dylan. Other than that...WOW!