antimelrose

Hello! I'm pressed for time, but I want to at least give a small review rather than none at all. You had a very interesting theme here. Couldn't find Graham's ...

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There were some enjoyable moments in this, but I think there are a few places you can tweak that will really make it nice. :arrow: The end of the second ...

Thanks for the reviews. Navita– emo poetry, how perfect. I mean, Wuthering Heights, Edgar Allen Poe– I like ominous, morbid work. But yes, I get your meaning. :D I will ...

I was thinking of Mr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde when I read this. :D I have just a few nitpicks, but otherwise it's a decent poem. The line that contains ...

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Hello again, and apologies for being late. I want to begin with some grammar suggestions before I get to the meat of the poem. (Don't worry, this will improve your ...

Stopping by on a spring day. I'd say that the poems get better and better as they go along. The first one didn't really do anything for me; it had ...

There was a lush, musical quality to this that was really enjoyable. The rhyme and rhythm almost never felt forced, which was really refreshing to read. Plus the theme (love) ...

This is from the Pirates of the Caribbean Kids book, isn't it? I think the title is Jack Sparrow: Siren Song. I mean, if you actually painted this, that's amazing. ...

I know this is late, but I have been wanting very badly to review this for over a week. Here goes. The first stanza talks about a noun that is ...

Heheh. Yeah, I knew this one had some duddy moments, but I couldn't put a finger on it. So thank you for pointing the problems out. So cliches and clarity ...

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I have said this before (and my intent, believe it or not, is to avoid redundancy) that I will rework this piece in order to suit the directions your criticisms ...