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All right, the people who claim that Jesus never said he was God either purposely chose to misread the New Testament or clearly never read it at all. I'm sorry ...

Your use of language in this comes across as very well written, and the poem was engaging to read. Best of all, it didn't have a quality of being trite, ...

Thank you everyone for your reviews! I'll try to revise it some more... and next time I post something I'll try not to make the format so jolting. Peanut19: I ...

Well, it has some good moments, but overall the way you constructed the sentences (in order to fulfill the rhyme) sometimes makes for a jolting effect. It would be good ...

There was a sparse quality to it that I liked. Yes, the final stanza kind of tilted the whole thing on a slightly unflattering angle...but the lines I really enjoyed ...

I'm new. I'm also rather bewildered about all the rules (I know, newbie, right!) and I've just posted a few meek reviews of some poetry. I've already glanced at a ...

Every time I see your name next to a work, I find myself afraid to click– what did the genius write this time? And I have never been disappointed. This ...

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Hello! Here's another review to add to your collection. "Death Clock" provided an interesting, if morbid read. The way you wrote it left some mystery to the reader: How could ...

Hello! Thanks for sharing this with us. First off, the only grammatical misstep I see so far is the one in the second stanza where you seemed to have forgotten ...