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I loved this. I think the way you spaced the lines worked really well. I have a few suggestions, but really they are very, very small. There is an orange ...

I like it, everything except And the rainbows from your lips fill me with life , which makes me think of those plastic pony things with technicolor manes. Other than ...

Wow, I like it. Usually short poems aren't that good. Correction, MY short poems are not good. Anyway, yours is awesome. I love the last line. Maybe add some punctuation? ...

I don't think it's dull, exactly. Her sadness echoed ... I like that. And took out her mother's needle The needle's a cool image. Like a sword, only sewing is ...

LOL! Clever. I like it.

I like the first line. And... I think I like the rest. I mean, it's really interesting. But it's also kind of hard to tell what your talking about. There's ...

I was just giving her credit. I don't think either of us really cares about the points. You can keep them. Happy Thanksgiving!

Wheee! Happy Thanksgiving everybody! I like pecan pie. Mmmmmmmmmmmm....... :)

Whadaya think?

HAPPY THANKSGIVING MEET ME NEAR THE CLOCK TOWER AT TWELVE MIDNIGHT TONITE Jennafina is here and she did the first one.

jennafina is fun and sweet and she has a cute avatar. Plus she is funny and writes great stories. I love her!

ooh... pretty. I like the second one. It's very... hypnotizing.

Beautiful images and personally I liked the london bridge reference. Great job.

yah... I love this... I love all your stories. Misspellings included :). Lillian seems like a really cool character. And the plot is exciting. You are brilliant. :D

I liked this. The rhyming is really well done and not distracting, and it has a kind of quietness I really like. Or something. The last two lines are nicely ...