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Seeing my California Cousins again Meeting the baby my other cousin had YWS Getting a real camera Turning 15 Climbing on rooftops Getting new glasses for the first time in ...

I loved the stanza that repeats, especially Paper folds in unison, but my hands don't bend that way. Those lines are awesome. The fourth stanza was my least favorite, I ...

Lol. That's cool. And the title made me laugh. A little long maybe? I kind of lost the plot near the end. Anyway, that was sweet. :)

loony lovegood does NOT have anime eyes. Sorry. I can be possesive of my imaginings. I love your stuff though. Sorry I can't critique. :D

Wow. I'm not going to pretend like I understand it, but that's just really beautiful. Bare your feet with imperfections For holy are the sinful humble Cast your pearls among ...

Cool! I hate wearing coats.

It's kind of cool how it's all run together and doesn't really seem like a poem. I thought to myself, Why do you care? and answered, "I'm a giraffe." I ...

Those are awesome. Yeah all the stuff you draw is awesome. I like the one with a long nose and glasses but I'm too lazy to go and see what ...

I like this. Alot. The rhythm is perfect and the one word lines that start the stanzas are really effective. The first stanza is my favorite. The last one seems ...

I don't know if I understand it exactly but I love this. Amazing images. Yeah, just beautiful. Kudos.

Spellcheck!!!! Sorry. Actually I really like the poem, but there's so many spelling mistakes that it's pretty hard to read. Anyway: It's me against the world If i must pick ...

I liked this, it's sweet. It doesn't seem too long to me. The last stanzas were especially cool, talking about how much smaller everything is, and the ending with your ...

You seem cool. Your siggy is interesting. And I like your avatar. Blue dragon... Purty.

I liked it. Like the butterfly girl said, I love the way you started it. plus, it's exactly how I feel alot of the time. Freakily so. *Shrugs*. Nice job.

Ooh, I like this. Like Nymph said, the expectancy that comes with seashells is incorporated coolly. every shell can hear the sound of the sea. even the smallest, the weakest, ...