antigone

I liked it too, very raw and very good. I agree with Xantham Gum about "just perfect" and "just wrong", the way they contrast with each other and break up ...

That was beautiful, just... wow. The rhyming was, of course, brilliant and I loved the rhythm, it seemed so fast and wild and free. The only thing I might change: ...

Umm... Is it about religion brainwashing people? And knowledge is the power I control And heresy’s a leisurely walk now And who knows if I’m right, I could be wrong ...

First of all, I liked it. It has really good atmosphere, or something. And there is a lot of blood, but it's effective. Kind of chilling. So nice job. But ...

I really like this, especially the first stanza. And then the others are cool cause you switch things around and get new perspectives. It sounds like a hard assignment, and ...

I like it. Especiallly the ending was brilliant. Like Doubt said, the questioning is very nice.

This poem won a contest and will be posted on the buses! Congradulations, RiverGirl! :elephant:

Hmmm.... Minor nitpicks first: I hide my pain from everyone, only my pain ever shows. That line confuses me. It seems to contradict itself. and i'm stil "young" and "Immature." ...

I loved the tone of this, angry and fed up but still loving all at the same time. And your images are convincing and unique. In particular I liked the ...

You should TELL me when you post your stuff! :evil: Seriously, though, that was so great. Savana of the Spoons! Awesomeness. How do you come up with this stuff? I ...

This has rhythm and rhyme but it avoids being too forced or sing-songy, which is really nice and also hard to do. So nice job. Also the title is intriguing. ...

I liked this. It seemed sweet and kind of simple, but in a good way. Comparing someone you love to a poem (Is that right? Sorry if I'm getting the ...

I like little tiny chapters. They make things go faster.

Oh god, that is so sad. But beautiful. “Three months, maximum”— one day, one week, one month, two. April showers pounded down intravenous rain clouds. I loved that stanza. "intravenous ...

Ooh. I like. I love the rhythym and tone of this... It sounds almost like whispering, kind of secret and seductive. If that makes any sense. I’ve got a million ...