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I have nothing useful to say, but I love this. That's all.

Sorry to be redundant but I definitely agree about the punctuation, especially since this has kind of a repetitive structure in the first half. (Not that that's bad, but punctuation ...

Wo0t. I like your siggy.

kang-gee-roooo!!! ^_^

I used to play harmonica. I kinda... stopped though. But that's cool! And welcome. :frosty: A snowman for the poor deprived australian. :)

Yeah, that's just... beautiful. Does the french line mean something like "this is not Paris, my love"? Heh, I don't speak french. But it's very pretty. I liked the middle ...

His eyes... So shiny... *salivates* Wow. Veeeery nice. You do so do him justice. I have to close the window because otherwise I might start making out with my computer ...

9/10 Hilarious!

I love the rhythm/rhyme/repetition thing here. It's continually surprising and different... But in a very good way. Under queen That was especially cool. Sorry, no useful critique, but I love ...

I like how this was short but it still seemed perfectly complete. Really beautiful. 'Lazy rain" and "Rivulets of water smeared with the music of blood" are both really cool ...

Modest, aren't we? :) But I liked 'and so the world changed.' too.

Thank you! I know snowflakes is usually one word, but I felt it fit better as two. Thanks for pointing it out though.

Cool. I love the first stanza. The dog's eye is a wonderful image, plus give the world to this tumbling sky. Just loverly. The middle stanza I liked... less. I'm ...

Soft and pretty. "Tired with the burden of haunting" is a great image. Or idea or whatever. Nice job. You say alot with so few words.

Assemblages. Pieces of past lives Balanced on the windowsill. It's cold outside. In a crystal ball On a copper stand A picture of the world Inverted. The lonely man Puts ...