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Re: A Chance Encounter
Great job- That's exactly how I felt about this one guy. So yeah... Really nice.
May 12, 2005 -
Re: A Moth Fluttered In
A moth fluttered in, confused by the yellow unforgiving incandescent light. It was seeking the moon. The girl cupped him in sweaty hands and met him, Eye-to-eye. “Good Evening, Monsieur ...
May 9, 2005 -
Re: normal is that way
That's beautiful. I really liked it.
May 8, 2005 -
Re: Oscillation
Wow. That's really cool. I love the way you use the words, but I don't think I quite get it. What does it mean?
May 8, 2005 -
Re: Missing You
I liked it. I think the rhymes add a lot.
May 4, 2005